Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the number of committed crimes in society is on the increase and it becomes a serious problem for government authorities. Although there are fixed punishments for the crimes and criminals are aware of the consequences, the crime figures show a dramatic increase in recent years. It is believed by a group of people that fixed punishments should be replaced by more flexible punishments, this will be discussed below.
There are some persuasive arguments in favor of having fixed punishment for each type of crime. Firstly, it seems to be a deterring parameter for offenders who decide to commit a crime since they are aware of the consequences. Secondly, the justice system would be much fair and decisions would not be based on the judges' attitudes toward the problem and judging would be much easier. Finally, making awareness in society would bring excessive knowledge for the younger fellows and may prevent them from vandalism, juvenile delinquency, smuggling, rubbery and the like. Furthermore, serious crimes would be distinguished easily from petty crimes.
On the other hand, there are some strong arguments against fixed penalties and a group of people believe that the motivation for committing a crime should be taken into account. The most important impact of such a decision would be on the judicial system since judges can make decisions by analyzing the situation in which the crime is committed. Take a thief for example, who rubbed some loaf of breads with the aim of feeding his family. The penalty should be far different with punishment of a person who does rubbery as a job and with the purpose of making benefits.
To sum up, although fixed punishment is beneficial in order to make awareness among people and reveals the results of committing a crime for criminals, the more flexible penalties seems to be more fair and will lead to better judicial system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09584664537 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.751520353 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514376996805 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5353316417 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.692307692 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425334508915 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166913863216 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108154639179 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26838328602 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617988205098 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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