Some people believe that traditional music album and single consumption is vital for the music industry. On the other hand, others think that digital streaming and downloading play bigger roles.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Write at least 250 words.
Today's world is a digital world. People's preferences have shifted from ancient to the modern ones. This is seen almost in every sphere. Music has also seen a lot of phases since its beginning. Some people are in favour of old music albums whereas others believe that digitalisation plays pivot role.
To begin with, I will discuss about those who consider traditional music significant for the music industry. It is important to be a part of an industry as it widens the knowledge of a person. One get to know about so many things related to the music in details. Despite, when someone wants to start his/her career in singing then it is necessary that he/ she should have single platform where they can present their talent as initially noone would be knowing them so if they will be associated with renowned industry, it will become easier for them to get popularity.
On the other hand, there are some people who believe that digital platform is a huge platform which brings plethora of benefits. For instance, a person does everything independently and with his voice he can create a large number of audience. In today's era, social networking sites are quite common. Many people have made their career through it. Posting singing videos on you tube and instagram have become common these days. There are many celebrities who get popularity through this media and have numerous followers these days. In addition to this, the talent of a person remains globally accessable through digitalisation. Another benefit is, it becomes easier to listen the music at any time and anywhere due to its downloading feature.
To recapitulate, I would say there are more advantages of digital music rather than that traditional album music. Therefore, we should promote this further. Nevertheless, today's world is more oriented towards technology so in coming days the digital platform will grow rapidly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...t their talent as initially noone would be knowing them so if they will be associated with...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...dently and with his voice he can create a large number of audience. In todays era, social network...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04444444444 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64034629763 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.9328551892 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.45 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217695296935 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599353717233 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767748369953 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131510454956 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362971109693 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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