Some people believe that traditional music album and single consumption is vital for the music industry. On the other hand, others think that digital streaming and downloading play bigger roles.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Write at least 250 words.
In modern world, technology has takenover the traditional way of performing various activities, which humans have been following since ages. Even, our music industry have been coping with development of latest technical know-how, one being the shift of music consumption from contemporary way of developing and promoting music albums to the latest technology of digital streaming and downloading.
Intially the dependency of music industry was purely based upon the individual music albums and their promotion by the way of distributers and televised initiatives.These practices led to the creation of new industry and gave multiple people a medium to earn livelihood by the way of taking up jobs like music composer, instrument players, technicians, background music records etc. Apart this shifted the power of dominating music industry in few hands, thereby restricting the enterance of new comers and preferring the ones having good financial boosting and strong backup, thereby pressing the real talent.
Over the past decade, industry has seen a big revolution with the invent of digitalised formation of music. This in turn has given freedom to the upcoming and enthiused singers to develop their own music and promote the same via digital means. Earlier, many budding singers were struggling to showcase their talents considering financial backing and lack of promotional modes, but with introduction of digital platforms like youtube, Instagram, online streaming apps, things have now gone quite simpler and a talented musicians can fulfill their dream of becoming popular and pursue their profession.
To recapitulate, the current scenario in music industry has undergone a huge change, as now digital music has taken over the contemporary way of devloping music with is itself beneficial for the struggling singers and music industry as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...industry has seen a big revolution with the invent of digitalised formation of music. This...
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'musician'?
Suggestion: musician
...e now gone quite simpler and a talented musicians can fulfill their dream of becoming pop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55438596491 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91953018647 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.9075207768 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 197.875 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.625 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197362382494 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904274220622 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630367312377 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13402778818 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463740623827 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.0946893788 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.64 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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