Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children)
Education is a fundamental building block for children’s development. Some people believe that a career-oriented education system is best for students. However, others emphasis on the community services and propose it to be an essential part of the high school programmes. I completely accord with it.
To embark on, it is said that to be a successful person, the prerequisite is to be a good human being and community service is the recipe for that. Firstly, children learn the meaning of selfless help, teamwork, and kindness. Moreover, helping unfortunate ones teaches us the value of easily available things such as food that we do not think twice before wasting. Furthermore, dealing with different types of people from distinct backgrounds helps in understanding discrete cultures better. Also, social service is not limited to serve the human fraternity. It is about doing something for the betterment of any living being. I personally worked for an NGO named as PAL to save the stray animals which led to a feeling of satisfaction.
However, it is argued that children may deviate from studies if they are involved in such activities, which can have an adverse effect on their careers. Therefore, it should not be included in the education system while many universities give extra points or scholarships to the applicants who have been indulged in such projects.
To conclude, undoubtedly, studies should be on the highest priority but not on the cost of life values. Both play an important role in personality and are vital parts of the overall development.
- Your school has enough money to purchase either computer for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy – computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation. 73
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) 61
- Your school has enough money to purchase either computer for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy – computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation. 73
- Your school has enough money to purchase either computer for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy – computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation. 73
- Facing many international pollution issues such as the energy shortage and global warming Some people believe that individuals have limited abilities to deal with that issue compared with the nations and society 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ducation
ducation is a fundamental building block for chi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17578125 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04571041445 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6484375 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6485014802 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27299697627 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767534361351 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639272875891 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148379080106 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984257091119 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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