some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. others believe that it is better to spend this time doing something related to the schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer?
In recent years, the whole world has been changing enormously at the speed of light with the advent of new ideas and concepts. Furthermore, parents have become busier than before as a result of increasing living expenses and demands, hence, some parents find themselves with very little free time. Accordingly, A controversial debate, though, which is often raised concerning the ethos of this issue is whether parents should spend their leisure time having fun or doing schoolwork with their kids. Ergo, when it comes to my stance, by weighing up the pros and cons, I firmly hold that having fun with children bridges the gap between children and parents for three reasons which I will explore in the following.
First and foremost, the prime reason why I am of such a belief is that as we all know that memory is the only thing that left when time passes. Even though childhood is short vis-à-vis a man's lifespan, people have always described their teens' stories as unforgettable ones. As an illustration, I remember so well every single moment of playing games with my parents.
By the same, another paramount reason that must be mentioned here is that as experts say "stop trying to perfect your children, but keep trying to perfect your relationship with them". Therefore, if parents want to prioritize their kids' needs, they will have to take much more care to their children's emotions. Which is why the most important parental duty is to give kids a real sense of confidence, belonging and security at home which cause them to share their thoughts and events with them.
last but not least, it is undeniable fact that doing some things that are related to kids' school work is challenging. If student's had not done their schools' task's it would make their parents irritate who already face a huge deal of stress at work. As a result, reprimand seems unavoidable, which leads to sadness, deprivation, and hopelessness for both groups. As a result, teaching tasks should be delegated to teachers.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, I definitely I believe that the parents who are preoccupied with work should use their little spare time for joining activities like games and sports with their kids rather than assisting their studies to strengthen the family relationship. To sum up, having discussed the rationales, I am
of the opinion that having fun with their children brings about a harbinger of far better times to come for families.
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...ted to kids school work is challenging. If students had not done their schools tas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99277108434 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68652114238 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607228915663 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4181940508 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352498613944 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984718395803 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812266689587 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175363378715 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814691956561 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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