Some people believe that the world is much less safe today than it used to be. there are still many wars being fought, and high tech weapons are sold openly to any country that wants to buy them. in cities, violent crime is increasing every year. it is not a very safe world in which to bring up children. do you agree or disagree?
Conflicts between the world’s population have not begun recently, they had existed before starting
human’s civilization. We hear commencing or increasing tension among countries or governments everyday. Having invested huge amounts in military equipment, that designed and produced with modern technology, the governments want to protect themselves against threats with the
other countries. The Public are worried not only because of tensions between nations, but also for increasing savage among citizens. Some groups believe that in this situation the world is not as safe as previously to live and it is not rational to bring up new generations. To my mind, though the disputes have increased, the world is less hazardous for the human compared to the previous century.
Nowadays, all around the world are dominated by the mass media which covering all events and
reflecting them to the community. As result of which, people are informed of the all news
regarding the conflicts between countries and any violent action in cities. though the common
people may be thinking the world is less safe as result of the more report of the fights, the societies
show great sensitives to this events and many NGO and people are embarking upon activities against
the wars and violence. For instance the reaction to the Gulf war 2 - between Iraq and the USA-was
more intense than Vietnam’s war because of the influence of the media.
The public awareness against the wars and savages has increased, . that is why the governments are not free to start new fights the same as they did before or In the cities the crimes are confined even against animals. We can find many books, lectures, TV shows or articles that emphasize the peaceful societies for every one. In the previous century, the history were recorded many wars and savage savagery by genocidal regimes, such as which what was happened in the Balkans.
To sum up, in my opinion the world is more safe than it was and can be more secure as result of humans’ activities against the fight and war
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, regarding, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06725146199 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62276811554 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546783625731 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7065378314 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.533333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217561850724 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644508544435 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414400190524 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759314315522 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422955800129 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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