One of the key attribute of human evolution is that humans have evolved to consume variety of foods. Choice of giving up meat and fish is a debated topic. As a supporter of environmental preservation, I personally believe that giving up meat or fish could not only benefit one's health but also the world as a whole. This essay will argue why some people would choose not to eat meat or fish in regards to my opinion.
We are what we eat, Our diet dictates our health. To live a healthy life we ought to maintain a lean and easy to digest diet. Generally meat is considered to contain fat which in the long run contribute to heart related complications. Avoiding meat and choosing a vegetarian option for our daily meals could lead to a healthy life when we get older.
The current population level meant that there is more demand than supply. Production of meat and fish on a large scale is negatively impacting our environment and contributing to climate change. A large number of land, feed and water is required to farming cattles. Studies reveal that it takes less than 20 percent of resources if were to gain the same amount of protein and carbs through farming of plants and fruits. Though many believe fish is healthy option compared to meat, overfishing in a rapid pace than the ocean could produce is a huge concern for countries and environmental groups. Large scale production of meat and fishing is costing considerable amount of natural resources.
In conclusion, Why some people may give up meat and fish is understandable, and in my opinion it certainly has its benefits not only on our health but also on the environment which contributes to the world as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...ent and contributing to climate change. A large number of land, feed and water is required to far...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70608108108 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72494018873 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0490559681 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259135082922 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823792091038 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917370459266 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174682309527 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102315200516 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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