It is thought by some that art is crucial, while others opine that it is not important. In my opinion, I completely believe that art provides better advantages including social and health benefits.
The benefits of art are many and varied. Firstly, it assists with the recording of history. One obvious reason for this is that without art, a lot of what is known in the prehistoric times would have remained a mystery. For example, the cave markings and the ancient artefacts that have been dug up and kept in the museums educate the previous generations and also the future generations. Moreover, the various kinds of artwork in play help us to comprehend what the world was like before now. Thus, understanding art is quite entertaining as well as educative.
Another significant advantage is that art helps in the beautification of the environment. A practical illustration of this is sculptures and paintings. By beautifying the surroundings, they also convey direct messages to individuals and local societies. Furthermore, music, which remains a form of art, is extremely good for adequately maintaining the physical, emotional and mental wellbeing. Music has been increasingly used to treat depression and mental illnesses and has provided both emotional support for patients and their families. Finally, art creators have also enjoyed the its merits, as it provides them with a cathartic experience from creating and performing.
In conclusion, although people may vary in their opinion regarding the importance of art, I strongly agree that it offers more benefit to artists, individuals and society at large.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31782945736 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03856192997 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9436469092 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153859693068 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459375182592 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334200367436 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876336074179 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168183347954 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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