It is often said that , in today’s era people wants everything they see. They like everything but when it comes to price they are unable to take such things as they have sheer amount of choices. Some say that , people consider price as most important thing to consider when buying a product or a service. However , I completely disagree with this statement.
First and foremost , people should not consider price when buying a product or a service. Some people believe that branded tag products are costly but and they buy the products but it is completely different they should see a product detail and quality of the product. If quality and product’s durability is excellent than it’s price is obviously is going to be high. So , more concentrate on other features of product rather than sticking your eye on price.As an example , if you want cell phone than you must see the product battery power , features , how much time it last on , the phone do not blast when it get hot to some extent , it has safety application when any worst situation arise and so on. This all will be excellent of cell phone than you can buy that phone. Price will be Going to be high because the phone is good. Do not more see on price.
Furthermore , when it comes to services they must see the facilities , the doctor which is going to help you , the person who is suffering for seviour problem will be cure soon people should think about this rather than seeing price. If you medical service is phenomenal than they should not see the price. To show an example, if a person is suffer say such as flue and he is taking medicines but he is not getting recover , he will not go to some professional doctor because he is saving money. However , but he is not seeing that in medicine which he is taking since long but not getting cure , he is wasting money on medicine but , instead of he could have consult a professional doctor.
Last and foremost , people should not see money when they get proper service and a product . It will be beneficial to them only in future. To examplify , if they go to some good doctors they will not get any problem for long time. In addition to product if they buy products of good quality they do not have to see for long time like say for 10 - 12 years for example if they by microwave.
To draw a conclusion , price is not important when you get proper facilities and services and if one have enough money than they should not see money. I my opinion , would say if people get better thing they should prefer that thing most and do not see any other things to get cheap things you will get suffer you are getting things proper than grab it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 484.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36994375556 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.396694214876 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8801505412 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0476190476 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337878139172 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126048112591 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119923407794 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205586819265 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102896342499 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.