Some people don’t want to change their behavior to reduce energy production to fight environmental issues. Why do you think they don’t want to change they behavior? What can make they change it?
Climate changing and others environmental issues are problems affecting our global community in last years. Our expanded way to live is causing big changes in various aspects of the natural life. If we don’t decide to modify drastically our behavior we won’t leave a healthy environment for our descendants.
Unfortunately there are some people that don’t want to change their behavior; and I think there are two main reasons why they don’t care about what is happening with our home. I would say the first reason why is they simply don’t believe that the environmental issues are a real problem. By this I mean that they think that our way of life or our behavior are not truly affecting the planet. For them, all of this is a huge lie told by the capitalists to have control over our personal lives.
Secondly, I would argue that people are living so comfortable that they don’t want to have some difficulties to change their behavior. People love so much their lives, their cars and their enormous houses that they don’t want to think in changes, speacially if that changes are going to make them loose their affordable lifes. For example, is hard to think that a big family with two or three kids will want to sell their cars to begin to use public transportation because of the environment.
Therefore, despite of these people that or don’t believe in tin this reality or don’t want to change their comfortable lifes, there are some alternatives to help these people to change their behavior, such as electric cars or public sistem to recycle the garbage that might help the planet and also don’t require much effort from common citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, i mean, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97543859649 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70524722957 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522807017544 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.209108171 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.909090909 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.514047493487 0.244688304435 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209832798573 0.084324248473 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15598603014 0.0667982634062 234% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328311034653 0.151304729494 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100072401757 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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