It is widely accepted that forming a happy and stable family is a backbone of any society. Considering an age limit for marriage is incumbent upon the legislative system. I am a strong advocate of this attitude since considering an age limit is prerequisite to form a long lasting marriage. analyzing the inability of people to find a suitable job and being financially dependent on their parents and not being capable of making mature decisions before 21 years of age will show this.
To begin with, most people graduate form universities in their 21st and then are able to find high salaried professions. A person with high school diploma, for example, is forced to do general jobs with low remuneration. What is problematic for these couples is that they have to be dependent on their parents to solve their financial requirements. Thus, it is this age which officials should consider as the minimum age at which individuals are allowed to start the spousal relationship.
Secondly, a fair number of people believe that youngsters can not make rational decisions for their life. As an illustration, more people do not care about the job prospect or the monetary issued when they are young. However, these criteria can affect the duration of marriages directly and should gain considerate attention while forming a family. Hence, adjourning getting married for later times may affect their points of view and help them make more plausible decisions.
However, the opponents of this approach claim that if the government designates a minimum age of 21 for the marriage, the rate of juvenile delinquencies will increase in the society. For instance, a person who gets married sooner is burdened with many responsibilities and can not wander freely in the streets and commit petty crimes. Old marriages can be considered as an infallible precursor to the spread of crime in the community. Therefore, matrimony bond should be hold in earlier ages to deter youngsters perpetrating offences.
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- Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Analyzing
...uisite to form a long lasting marriage. analyzing the inability of people to find a suita...
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Line 7, column 472, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'held'?
Suggestion: held
...ty. Therefore, matrimony bond should be hold in earlier ages to deter youngsters per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13190184049 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91622299919 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588957055215 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3942197424 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214151902685 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644453827248 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464171430144 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126634327526 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219293458489 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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