Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobs
because of the freedom they offer.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today's world, everyone has the flexibility to choose between different kinds of job depending on their likes and dislikes. Whereas some prefer a permanent job with greater stability, there are others who like working part-time. this essay will discuss both the opposing ideas and will also share my opinion.
Many people select those occupations which have more job security. The primary reason for this is that it gives the person inner satisfaction and peace and one can be assured of being able to earn even in times of crisis or disability. On one hand, it frees them from the unnecessary hassle of finding new work quickly and on the other hand, it provides an opportunity to plan for the future. For instance, majority of adults have an inclination towards government or public sector jobs. Besides offering many benefits and perks, it has job guarantee and the ability to transfer your work to your kin in case of demise. Hence, people find full-time fixed kind of jobs more attractive and lucrative.
Nevertheless, there are still others who keep switching jobs and appreciate the freedom of being able to make their own decisions. The part-time jobs do not give enough perks or benefits nor do they have any tenure commitment, but these offer the ability to experiment in multiple fields. To illustrate, some students pick up small jobs in supermarkets or restaurants during their summer holidays and gain relevant experience which can help them in long-run.
To close, based on the personality of each individual, both kinds of job can be good or bad. In my opinion, I prefer a full-time permanent work environment for its ease of mind.
- Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible.Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter, e 73
- Some people believe that the libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them However others do not agree Discuss both sides and give your opinion 89
- You recently stayed at a hotel. While coming back from the hotel, you discovered that you have left an item of clothing there. Write a letter to the manager. In that letter:-Describe the item.-Specify where he can find it.-What you like him to do. 70
- You want to apply for following job. Write a letter to Mr Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job. Waiter/waitress required for evening work. Some experience would be necessary. 73
- Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobsbecause of the freedom they offer.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... are others who like working part-time. this essay will discuss both the opposing id...
^^^^
Line 9, column 460, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rience which can help them in long-run. To close, based on the personality of ea...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, whereas, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67644512774 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63309352518 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6731826032 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297169910526 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087419529745 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597057520586 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158913181609 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144172568129 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.