Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible.
Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter, explain:
who you are and why you are writing
request these documents
ask whether you need to pay any fee for that
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
my name is pooja arora and I was a student at the presentation skills course last year at the Sydney college of Australia. I am writing this letter to ask for the copies of my mark-sheets and assignments during my term there. I hope that you can give me these at the earliest.
Recently, I got selected by the Art and Creativity Studio company where the job profile includes demonstrating newly built sculptures, paintings to the prospective buyers. In order for me to start working there, I need to send my educational certificates and the projects I submitted there during my tenure in the college.
Would you please offer me a duplicate of my assessments as well as projects I did in the college. Also, let me know if there is any fees involved in it. I can give a pay order for the same. I appreciate all your help in getting this done at the earliest.
Thank you for your kind consideration.
Yours sincerely,
pooja arora
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, my name is pooja arora and I was a stude...
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Line 9, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ertificates and the projects I submitted there during my tenure in the college. ...
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Line 13, column 120, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are any fees'?
Suggestion: there are any fees
...id in the college. Also, let me know if there is any fees involved in it. I can give a pay order ...
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Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd consideration. Yours sincerely, pooja arora
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73372781065 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85567794704 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8123052041 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7272727273 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231569010416 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856037514583 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790769808483 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138640421315 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101825993601 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.