Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Many people argue that to live in an apartment is better than living in a house. The essay will discuss that a person is not allowed to modify the apartment's design is the main disadvantage, while having more privacy and additional amenities in a house far outweighs any drawback.
The primary drawback of living in a building block is that a person cannot change the design of his or her apartment. This is to say that the residents of the high-rise buildings are abide by rules and regulations laid down by the managing authorities. Even if the resident want to make any minor modification, he or she has to get a permission for the supervising authority. For instance, a survey revealed that 87% of the residents of The Flower society building does not like its outside paint color, but they are not allowed to make any changes to it. I believe, the restrictions in an apartment culture make resident's living less worthwhile.
The people living in a house enjoy more privacy and extra amenities. This is because they are not sharing their residential plot with anyone else, and this often leads to lesser interference from there people living nearby. In addition, people enjoy more space, such as parking and garden areas, where they can park their vehicles and their children can play anytime. For instance, as per the survey conducted by The Times magazine, 73% of the people prefer to live in a house than in an apartment because of more privacy and perks. I believe, these factors eclipse the drawback of staying in a house.
In conclusion, living in a house provide more privacy and other perks of a comfortable life that far outweigh the disadvantages of living in an apartment while following strict rules.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'abided', 'abode'.
Suggestion: abided; abode
...esidents of the high-rise buildings are abide by rules and regulations laid down by t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83108108108 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70448421015 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523648648649 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8770086389 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418681946805 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161147509571 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152994062785 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287229492726 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109147493915 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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