Nowadays, in Urban areas, we can see people more aligned towards apartments rather than independent houses. Well, apartments and houses have there own advantages and disadvantages, it also depends on the personal liking of people.
In Metro cities, most of the population live in apartments because of lack of space. On the other hand, the property is also very expensive. It becomes, tough for a common man to afford an independent house, whereas the price of the house is quite cheap in Tier 2 cities. People who prefer privacy and personal space prefer to live in houses because in apartments privacy is hindered to some extent. In apartments, one has to follow the rules and the guidelines framed by resident welfare organization whereas in-house, no rules are in place.
Apartments also have advantages of its own. In Apartments, there are problems related to sanitary and drainage as they are constructed by builders using modern plans. Even electricity issue is also not prevalent as 24 hours power backups are available. In houses, one has to install own backups for everything. As we can see, corruption is increasing rapidly and safety is becoming a crucial aspect. Apartments and societies have proper security agencies working with them so it is quite safe to stay in apartments. Various addition recreation facilities are available in apartments such as clubs, games etc. These facilities are quite important to maintain work-life balance in one's life.
To conclude, I would say that, keeping in mind aspects of safety and extra facilities apartments are a better place to live as compared to houses. However, it also depends on the personal choice of people as well. Apartments are a pocket-friendly option as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, whereas, as to, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15901060071 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86567863222 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583038869258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9399996908 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1111111111 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237557039338 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060704681904 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593391544064 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136403332036 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623097273576 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.