With the proliferation of modernization, people are far more rely on advertisement. One school of thought believe that these commercials helps a person to get to know about new product in the market, but others refute it by saying that people tend to buy unnecessary things, influenced by the Advertisements. We will discuss both in the passages below.
Undeniably, the TV commercials, posters, and few schemes posted on newspaper or online websites, grab people's attention. New product releases featured appliances and trendy clothing are key attraction for common man. In-fact universities and housing property are also one of the major contributors in advertisement industry. Grocery items which we use in daily basis, but if we get some marvellous offers, would add to the zeal by the help of advertisement. For example, new and different flavours of cornflakes, an essential breakfast of any house, would only be first displayed by advertising companies.
On the other hand, as they say no rose without thorns is justified in this case. Advertisement have adverse effects as well as this intend to make people allured towards the product by introducing amazing sale, cashback offers, and many more, for the unnecessary thing. In malls and huge shopping centres, the posters of fast food or toys target innocent children, and parents then need to buy to avoid nagging the center of the crowded place.
All in all, I agree that the advertisement play a pivotal role in people's life. They get to know fine products which they might admire from long, but the necessity is what individual should focus on. And I recommend that the advertisement which attacks children in negative way should get banned or eradicated.
- Healthcare should always be funded by governments and it should be always be free for people to use To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea 56
- In many countries very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV What do you think are the causes of this What solutions can you suggest 84
- Modern communications mean that it s no longer necessary to write letters To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need Some others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives Which viewpoint do you agree with 84
- Every country should have a free health service even if tlJis means thatthe latest medical treatments may not be available through the servicebecause they are too expensive Do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...s justified in this case. Advertisement have adverse effects as well as this intend ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17142857143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98320981768 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7267349074 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246659310836 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682881713273 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336455167844 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131909401749 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180603029189 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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