Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Some others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Many companies promote their product by means of advertisements. Most of the people in today's world say that advertisements motivates them in purchasing products that are not required for human life. Whereas the others believe that it provides them information about the new items that are introduced in the market could modify their life. According to me, advertisements keep us updated about the things which we want to buy.
Firstly, there are companies that are marketing unhealthy products in the society. For instance, health products for weight loss, hair loss and many more. They advertise such products in television and social media to get more customers and increase the companies profit. Let us consider Weight loss which is a major problem in today's world. In order to reduce the weight in a short span of time, people are purchasing weight loss products by watching the advertisements which is not required. Instead, they can maintain proper diet and exercise to overcome such problems.
Secondly, many products are introduced in the market every day which are unaware to us. Thus, advertisements play a good role in providing information about it. Let us consider clothes and jewels for example, during the festival season, many fashionable robes and jewels would arrived in the stores for selling. The companies advertise them in television and newspapers by posting the prices and offers which would create awareness among the people in buying them. Hence, advertisements help people to get updates about the products and also let them decide whether to buy it or not.
In conclusion, advertisements keep the people updated about the products available in the market. People will buy the product if they have a need for it.
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Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Suggestion: arrive
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er to buy it or not. In conclusion, advertisements keep the people updated a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20494699647 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77822571551 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515901060071 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6456279496 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6470588235 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262333273843 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927463717291 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624162037056 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182180714958 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488165698679 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.