Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Some others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Nowadays, advertisements play an important role in human life. It motivates many people to purchase items which are not required for their daily life. Some people say that it helps them in providing updates about the new and upcoming products in the market and I agree with the statement.
Firstly, people are not interested in buying things which are unnecessary. But the advertisements that are telecasted in television and internet would create eagerness to buy them. Only very few people shops for their need while the others procure for comfort and luxury. I had experienced it in my life. My friend has a craze over mobile phones. He often buys very expensive mobiles of different brands and exchanges them in every six months period. Moreover, this guy earns less than the price of the mobile but he wants to afford it because its features and specifications attracted him. This is an example of the advertisement that encourages him to buy. He would be unaware unless it was advertised in the internet.
Secondly, humans in today's world are searching for new products and also updates about the existing items in the market. The details for such things could be provided only by means of advertisements. For example, consider the televisions used a decade ago with the one which we are using now. There is vast change. Not only television, there many products that are change now and only advertisements could bring their existence to our knowledge.
In conclusion, people find things that are needed for them by means of advertisements. It gives us information about the products in the market but buying them depends on the requirement of the consumer. It never forces them to purchase it. If the person does not have any necessity for the product, he will not buy.
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| 2019-08-18 | Praveen Sankar | 61 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95016611296 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.787836692 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5085192403 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9523809524 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249828308949 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671659753442 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624311096197 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150760239643 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432047759682 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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