Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
People argue that advertisements are means of selling new products to consumers that may improve their living. I agree with the view point and the essay will reflect the reasons.
Firstly, advertisements are informative. The bring information of new products on the market and people are able to choose from different brands online advertisements save time and consumers can compare the products easily and at their convenience. For example, through advertisements people have become aware of alternatives to sanitary napkin. Now there are other options, such as tampoon on menstrual cups, to choose from which alleviates the worry of the mess.
Secondly, some advertisements go beyond promoting their products targeting the family love and relations. For instance, the indian advertisement of Cadbury shows that whether it is a couples tiff or quarrel between siblings or a festival where families come together, problems can be resolved with love and smile and Cadbury helps amplify that love and happiness. In another advertisement, a mother's love and care is portrayed through the hardships she overcomes for her children and Bournvita is there to aid in her journey. Here the product appears to provide support rather than being something people cannot do without.
In conclusion, though the advertisements are a way of selling the product but they contribute significantly by bringing the latest information and relaying the important of love and happiness with social message. These advantages carry more value from the traditional thinking and will play a bigger role in shaping people's lives for better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...irstly, advertisements are informative. The bring information of new products on the mark...
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Line 9, column 393, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mothers'' or 'mother's'?
Suggestion: mothers'; mother's
... happiness. In another advertisement, a mothers love and care is portrayed through the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47222222222 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99330528734 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630952380952 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3118168781 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.916666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21268999548 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791803787897 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410599034565 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130323561594 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373454932769 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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