It is said by some people that the government should put health care first while others are saying that spending should be on other relevant priorities. In my opinion, I believe individuals will live a healthy life if the government considers the healthcare system in the society first, and also focusing on other important matters will still help improve the overall economy.
On the one hand, when the healthcare system in a country is prioritized, it's citizens will enjoy living healthily. In other words, new kinds of diseases can be prevented given that our leaders focus mainly on caring for the health of its citizens. In China, for instance, the people enjoy the benefits of a healthy life because they have world-class health facilities situated in different parts of the country. Clearly, if the government mainly focuses on healthcare, then everyone can enjoy the glorious benefits of living a healthy life.
On the other hand, it is important that the authorities should focus on other relevant matters such as education and construction of roads. This is because paying close attention to these areas will help improve the economy of any country. Nigeria, over the years, to exemplify, have developed to become the giant of africa mainly because we have a lot of educated people, and we enjoy the abundance of good road network. All these have brought foreign investment our way. Thus, focusing on other priorities will definitely help improve the country's economic state.
To conclude, the government's focus on healthcare will promote a healthy lifestyle for its citizens, and also paying close attention to other relevant matters like education and road construction will help boost the economic value of that society.
- In Britain when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them Sometimes the government has to pay for this care Who do you think should pay for this care the government or the family 56
- Some people believe that the government should not spend too much money on outer space exploration Do you agree or disagree 61
- Internet contains a lot of information however sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong Do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Write a letter to your friend to recommend a book to read that you have read You should include Describe the book How it can help him her Where can he get it from 73
- People nowadays work hard to buy more things This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, then, thus, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18794326241 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66551818108 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517730496454 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6958647966 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219363375615 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871960842063 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115551750151 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141749078081 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107433316566 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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