Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In the present scenario, varieties of subjects are offered at school and learners study distinct subjects like math, science, history, music, and so forth. Many believe that subject like History plays a supreme role in students’ learning process, whereas another school of thought prioritizes the scientific subjects. Despite the fact that history has a great influence on society, I strongly advocate the field of science and technology and will scrutinize both the perspectives in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, history helps denizens to remember the traditions and the customs of any religion or community and it leads to help the upcoming generation to stay connected with their roots. Researchers or economist can be more aware about the terrible disasters happened in the past decades. As a result of it, they can find the best solutions by taking the initiative steps for the sake of humanitarianism. Apart from that, a trip to the historical museum during the learning period enhances the knowledge among the pupils especially youngsters about the human revolution and the heritages things.
On the flip side, in the period of modernization, the scientific subjects and the information about technology play a vital role to achieve the goals for an individual and a nation having more techno-savvy will progress more. To illustrates, it is noteworthy that the thrive and progress of each country depend upon its amendment in various branches such as promoted health care system, equipped army with advanced weapons, modern agricultural productivity and upgraded machinery in factories because having a top-level amenities in all these sectors would result in massive amount of income of a nation.
To conclude, in light of the aforementioned facts, people should have proficiency in scientific subjects more than other fields for the betterment of a country but they should not negligible completely their historical values and traditions.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, apart from, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45424836601 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99419889944 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6991180409 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.9 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176370351788 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606757302159 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475723704178 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977187193183 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624448908705 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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