Some people say it is the government's responsibility to fund school buses, while others think parents should be responsible for bringing their kids to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people opine that busses provided by the government for children is a more reliable way to travel to and from school, while others think that this is parent's responsibility to take care of their children. I think that organised busses funded by the government is a better solution.
On the one hand, it is beneficial for a child if a parent has time to give them rides to school and back, because shared busses take a considerable amount of time to deliver all the children to their homes. By doing that children and parents will have more quality time together, hence improving their bond. For example, in some spread cities as Los Angeles in the US, route from school to home on a school bus may take up to two hours, when a parent on a private car may accomplish it within 30 minutes. Thus they will have more time for conversations and activities with each other.
On the other hand, school busses are more convenient and safer way of travelling for children, because parents delegate responsibility of caring for a child to the bus service, while doing their own business. For example, if there is a single parent family, it is crucial for such parent to work as much as possible to earn enough money for a family, so by providing a bus, such parents may be sure that they will not be overloaded with such a routine as picking up a child from school.
In conclusion, there are some cases when parents would be a better way of riding a child to a school, but I think that government school busses are more convenient and safe way of travelling for both children and their parents, because this way does not impact the schedule of a parent without harming parent career and income.
- Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
- Economic growth and development are usually considered to be beneficial both for individuals and society as a whole. What are some advantages and disadvantages of economic development? 78
- Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? 73
- Some say that people working in different job roles should get different amount of holiday time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ar may accomplish it within 30 minutes. Thus they will have more time for conversati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57704918033 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52979238334 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468852459016 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.0692270263 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.111111111 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8888888889 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32576463481 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150648480884 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078650388549 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229441263619 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520416037397 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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