Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.
<p class="MsoNormal">Several people believe to keep things neat, organized and placing
daily use belongings in right place not only in home also in office location. I
strongly agree on this statement and to justify this essay will provide convincing
examples<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Firstly, there are people who usually misplace their
properties like keys in home and project materials in office. Later end up in
wasting lot of time by searching in wrong locations, sometimes they also insist
their loved ones or colleagues to help them find what they are looking for. To
prove that Standford University had done many surveys with the age group of 20
to 60 years and the results show that 70% of people who are older than 40+
losing time because of not keeping their stuffs in the correct place. However,
just 30% of people have never come crossed due to following tidiness in their surroundings.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">On the other hand, it is not important all the things have
to be place in the correct locations. Some people does not have objections for a
short time to not keeping it in the desire place. For instance, I enjoy reading,
I have taken a book from shelf and I will be carrying to bedroom, study and
living room till I finish reading the book. By this way I aware that something
I must complete in time. It is kind of reminder to achieve something which is
important to me.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">To conclude, keeping things organized and placing it in the
right place is easy to get the stuffs at the time when needed however certain
things which we use often has not to be in right place.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Daily
...ep things neat, organized and placing daily use belongings in right place not only ...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Properties
...are people who usually misplace their properties like keys in home and project materials...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Their
...locations, sometimes they also insist their loved ones or colleagues to help them f...
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Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Losing
... 70% of people who are older than 40+ losing time because of not keeping their stuff...
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Line 35, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
... is not important all the things have to be place in the correct locations. Some...
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Line 37, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Short
...people does not have objections for a short time to not keeping it in the desire pl...
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Line 41, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Living
...ill be carrying to bedroom, study and living room till I finish reading the book. By...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57651245552 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.28075029026 2.80592935109 188% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.7345872104 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.111111111 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177313178429 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793736109844 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669254427711 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517049541157 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545090471988 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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