some people say that the more a product is advertised more people buy it. To what extend do you agree?
Undoubtedly, purchasing essential are the unavoidable part of an individual's day to day life. It is widely considered that marketing of products paves the ways to its consumers. Personally, I believe that sales of product depend on its advertisement, but it is not the only way.
To begin with, it is a well-recognized fact that advancement in the advertisement industry has exponentially increased the publicity of the goods, which encourage customer to purchase it by giving compelling demonstrations. For example, ad of any new product provides its visual and show users how to use it, therefore, influencing them to buy. Besides, many companies use influencers or social icon to achieve trust of customers, for an instance, Virat Koli, the famous cricket player is now a part of various marketing adds. As a result, sales figures are accelerating with the rise in marketing.
In contrast, The One reason that stand out is the local product sale, even though there is no marketing of them but quality of it is a major contributing factor for it. Another type is the Ayurvedic items, Nowadays, health-conscious people prefer chemical free articles. Thus, we can say that quality play a significant role in consumption.
Having said that, Although, advertisement enhance the sales but quality assurance is an area of concern these days, that can be obtained with incorporation of quality standards by government ensuing in deceleration the promotion of deleterious objects.
To conclude, in my opinion, marketing and publicity of product features have improvised the sale, though there are other auxiliary facts which contribute to it. However, Government needs to take extra precaution about the quality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ssential are the unavoidable part of an individuals day to day life. It is widely considere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32103321033 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23559639427 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7170529548 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838131522399 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028206736037 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228050803264 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0428495084893 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213661470635 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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