Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is
no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to
be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
in the last a few years attitudes towards watching movies has changed considerably, in the past many people go to the cinema and watch their favorite movies but nowadays, some people prefer watch films in own mobiles or tablets. Both of views have benefit and drawback in my opinion due to this pandemic, it is better to stay at home and watch movies, moreover you even can see the new movies on online platform like Netflix and support your favorite actor or director and also enjoy your films.
on one hand, some people would like to watch film at home on their devices, this way can be has a many advantages such as, they can watch lots of movies not only they can stop the film whenever they like but also they can go backward or forward and even they can play the film once again. Many online platforms we have now for watching online; they are very cheap and easily anyone can subscribe to these platforms, therefore you can see whatever you want in any time you like to do it.
On the other hand, many peoples like traditional way and they would like to go to cinema to watch movies and spend the leisure time, cinema also have many merit, one of them is the quality of sound and video for example, you should see the Avatar movie in cinema because of unparalleled scene. Secondly going to cinema is good hobby and many people take a ticket and go to cinema with their friends and enjoy allover the movie. Another benefit is you tend to see the new films earlier, you should go to cinema and you cannot wait until the movies release on internet or tv.
In conclusion, I think totally watching movies lead to happy life, so if you are not able to go cinema for a while, you can stay at home and streaming videos and also buy online ticket for your favorite film and watch it online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40540540541 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1103442022 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483483483483 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8765109689 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.375 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.625 20.7667163134 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.875 7.06120827912 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234403542073 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11949422334 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257349898802 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152001605703 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332321095403 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.19 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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