Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is irrefutable that the government has a number of tasks to perform to protect different types of species including humans. Excess care and more than the requirement of resources are being deployed to protect wild animals and birds is said by some people. In my opinion, I agree and believe that we should focus more on humans as resources are limited.
One reason is that we have many more serious challenges to cover such as the safety of humans rather than focusing on birds and wild animals. Poverty and lack of medicines against deadly infections are the major issues of the current world, therefore the government must allocate more funds on such issues to control the deaths of a human being. For instance, a survey from the World Health Organization revealed that every day uncounted people are dying because of poor living conditions and lack of medicines to cure fatal diseases like cancer and HIV.
Another reason is that the extinction of one species from the world has limited effect on other species and the environment, thus spending huge money and other resources to protect these species is unjustified. For example, the disappearance of species dodo birds from Malaysian island has zero effect on other species on that island. Hence, it is a wasteful approach to appoint numerous scientists on the behaviour and study of such species.
In conclusion, human problems are more serious to cover and resources are little in quantity. However, the vanishing of wild animals and birds is not effecting to this world at major levels, therefore, we should not give more focus and resources on such issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99264705882 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59032335559 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2534657975 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.454545455 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121176321867 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050126742589 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491509781352 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834344682209 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580801060917 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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