Some people like to spend free time with the friends of the same age. Others like to spend free time with people with different ages. Discuss both the views and state your opinion?
In today's fast-paced world, it is essential to take some time off from work and spend it leisurely with friends and family. However, the question of whether to spend free time with friends of the same age or people with different ages remains a debatable topic. While some people prefer spending time with peers, others believe in the importance of building relationships with people from different age groups. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.
On the one hand, spending time with friends of the same age has its benefits. Firstly, it provides a sense of familiarity and comfort as individuals tend to share similar interests, experiences, and struggles. It can lead to a strong sense of bonding and long-lasting friendships. Secondly, it allows people to engage in activities that they all enjoy, such as watching movies, playing sports, or visiting new places, thereby enhancing their shared experiences.
On the other hand, spending free time with people of different ages can be equally advantageous. Firstly, it can broaden one's horizons and perspectives by exposing individuals to diverse experiences, cultures, and lifestyles. This can lead to personal growth and development, fostering empathy and understanding towards others. Secondly, it can provide opportunities to learn from individuals who have more experience and knowledge, particularly in areas of interest, leading to intellectual stimulation.
In my opinion, while spending time with peers is crucial for socializing and building relationships, it is equally important to interact with people of different ages. This can provide a sense of balance and enrich one's personal and intellectual growth. One should strive to find a healthy balance between the two, depending on their preferences and circumstances.
In conclusion, while there are benefits to spending free time with friends of the same age, there are also advantages to interacting with people of different ages. Ultimately, the choice of spending time with whom is a personal one, and individuals should aim to find a healthy balance to enjoy the best of both worlds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether; the question whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39221556886 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02455232082 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517964071856 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4918676303 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.941176471 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.525319123302 0.244688304435 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185739233678 0.084324248473 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201230881911 0.0667982634062 301% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320197705886 0.151304729494 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185390049215 0.056905535591 326% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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