Some people suggest that certain professionals like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film stars are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work they do. How far do you agree or disagree?
It is certainly true that there exists a vast difference between the earning potential of people in noble professions and the remunerations that celebrities make. Many people suggest that this difference should be brought down, and I am in complete agreement with this view as employees in noble professions contribute a lot to the society and often risk their lives for the wellbeing of society.
First, a teacher spends most of his life in teaching morals, values and life skills to the students. They not only work in the schools, but they act as role models even after the school and motivate people in achieving a lot in life. However, it is a painful truth that such teachers who spend their lives for wellbeing of children are under-paid in most countries while celebrities like actors who often set bad examples to the youth by enacting roles of gangsters or smoking or drinking on-screen are earning heaps of money. So, the argument that professionals such as teachers should earn more money completely sounds sensible.
Second, professionals like soldiers and nurses often risk their lives in order to protect the public’ lives but are also most under-paid. To detail further, a soldier has no guarantee of his life span; to protect the civilians of his country, he is constantly at war leaving his family alone and so is the case with nurses, when there are some outbreaks like Influenza, they serve people though they know that such diseases are contagious. Their lives are always close to the cross but still they serve the nation or people with all their might. Hence, rewarding them is much more sensible than showering money onto the people who just enact such great roles on the stage.
To sum up, people in noble jobs serve the society in true means and are constantly in danger due to their jobs. So, such benevolent professionals should be paid more money and rewards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, still, well, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90092879257 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57648390662 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551083591331 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.473871017 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.916666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253232953591 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948112803544 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529514878343 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158717885338 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384775408227 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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