Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about the tertiary subjects that whether they should be opted according to the future's need or out of the individual's choice. However, I believe that it should be up to the person about his majors.
At the outset, technological subjects have their benefits. Firstly, from a personal viewpoint, good career opportunities could be grabbed in the field of science. It is due to the contemporary era that employers tend to provide higher wages to engineers and doctors. For instance, a survey reported that 67% of alumni got their job in the field of Science and Technology, in 2018. Secondly, having got highly paid opportunities, these scientists and doctors have to deposit a huge amount of tax, according to the laws of the particular nation. That amount could be used for the betterment of infrastructure for the local civilization. Lastly, humans are suffering from dire ailments because of contaminated air and water; thus, doctors and scientists can pay their contribution to cure the medical diseases such as asthma, diabetes by their inventions in the foreseeable future.
On the other hand, there are various merits of choosing their subjects in the interested fields because people can achieve excellence. It is because of his interest level that all his physical and psychological energies work collaboratively to excel in his career. Numerous prodigies, in the field of drawing and painting, have proven that human can achieve the heights because of their passion such as MF Hussain in the field of painting. Subjects of arts and craft are imperative for the full development of society. If the world is full of doctors and scientists, our society will leave its vastness. It is only because of art subjects such as music and many more that society can make them stress-free otherwise various complications like depression could happen due to lack of enjoyment.
In conclusion, although the subjects of both science and arts have their positive aspects, in my view, learns should be free to choose their majors to achieve excellence in their fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16715542522 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89935759365 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563049853372 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7490185205 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.125 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192808011777 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06021839688 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547459289098 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133375631205 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647806425999 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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