Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extend do you agree?
Now a days, Education plays significant role in all aspects of everyone's life. Some people believe that, due to some juveniles thought some subjects are hard those subjects should be choice in spite of mandatory.A lion's share of people favours it but some critics go against it.However, I completely agree with the central area of the statement by
highlighting the justifications like overstress and lack of interest in studies.
Firstly, the pressurised education system had enhanced extreme stress in young mind. This in turn leads to anxiety and personality disorders has been raising around young lads in our society. For example, India evidenced suicidal cases among teenagers a lot due to fear of failure in exams.
Secondly, Children had lost their interest in studies due to hardness of subjects. Therefore, it indirectly deviates the young ones concentration away from their path to another mischievous things.For instance, lots of young adults are now drug addicted and alcoholics.
Contrarily, Some critics go against the above-discussed assertions. First and foremost, they argued that implementing hard subjects in the education are beneficial for the bright future of children .This gives rise to multitalented , knowledgeable young adults in our society. For example, competitive corporate companies has been seeking highly talented professionals.
Secondly, if we provide more complex education at right time with tough subjects in a young age.This helps to promote more sophisticated kids are becoming proud to their own mother country in many ways.For instance,Scientists who all are working internationally are obviously proud to their own nation.
To conclude, I personally believe that ,Enforcing difficult subject are not at all better option for healthy growth of children in spite allow them to choose their own field of interest to accomplish a bright future.
Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extend do you agree?
Now a days, Education plays significant role in all aspects of everyone's life. Some people believe that, due to some juveniles thought some subjects are hard those subjects should be choice in spite of mandatory.A lion's share of people favours it but some critics go against it.However, I completely agree with the central area of the statement by
highlighting the justifications like overstress and lack of interest in studies.
Firstly, the pressurised education system had enhanced extreme stress in young mind. This in turn leads to anxiety and personality disorders has been raising around young lads in our society. For example, India evidenced suicidal cases among teenagers a lot due to fear of failure in exams.
Secondly, Children had lost their interest in studies due to hardness of subjects. Therefore, it indirectly deviates the young ones concentration away from their path to another mischievous things.For instance, lots of young adults are now drug addicted and alcoholics.
Contrarily, Some critics go against the above-discussed assertions. First and foremost, they argued that implementing hard subjects in the education are beneficial for the bright future of children .This gives rise to multitalented , knowledgeable young adults in our society. For example, competitive corporate companies has been seeking highly talented professionals.
Secondly, if we provide more complex education at right time with tough subjects in a young age.This helps to promote more sophisticated kids are becoming proud to their own mother country in many ways.For instance,Scientists who all are working internationally are obviously proud to their own nation.
To conclude, I personally believe that ,Enforcing difficult subject are not at all better option for healthy growth of children in spite allow them to choose their own field of interest to accomplish a bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56426332288 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09105153781 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.1199030657 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.785714286 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38974568065 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127685227793 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172127560465 0.0667982634062 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173107487609 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.244182809259 0.056905535591 429% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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