some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past few decades, there is a remarkable rise in road accidents around the world and it is a matter of great concern. It is highly debatable that increase the legal driving age is best way to increase road safety. However, I completely disagree with this belief and this essay presents the supportive ideas that would justify my disagreement.
To begin with, although, increase in the minimum driving age would solve the issue of road safety to some extent but it is not the only best way. In fact, the primary factor that could improve the road safety is better infrastructure. Well constructed roads, properly working traffic lights and lights during night could avoid accidents to occur. For example, cctv installations at major highways and roads to monitor the traffic and penalize the rule-violators will be a good idea. In a research conducted by Delhi University students in 2016, it was found that 80% of the total road accidents were due to poor infrastructe.
Another major reason that could help in improving road safety is awareness programs. Public awareness campaigns to encourage people not to mix drink and drive and not to use mobile while driving. Not only this, the statistics that shows the last year road accidents and the after-accident lives of the victims could make a noteworthy effect on the audience.
To conclude, I completely disagree that only increase in the driving age would solve the issues of road accidents or promote road safety. There are many other measures that also need to be taken for effective results and better road safety including public awareness programs and better infrastructure as this will not only mitigate road accidents but will also improve the beauty and value of any country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02749140893 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69776303455 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9297940184 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272155801662 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108708238723 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127997015918 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170132392936 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570219321761 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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