There is an argument that whether giving longer incarciation to offender is good method to decrease infraction or there are more different methods to decrease delenquency. while criminal will afraid to do crime in future by receiving punishment,this essay beleaves that there are many different methods like providing education to criminal.
On the one hand, the major reason that how delinquency rate decreases by giving tough punishment to offenders is that they will afraid to do evel things next time, this is because they will not want to suffer from that punishment again. As a result ,violation ,infraction rates will reduces and it will maintain law and order in country. to emplify a survey conducted by Indian government in 2019 showed that by following law strictly, it help offenders to overcome from crime.
On the other hand , there are further more different techniques such as provide them sufficient education as a result decrement in crime rates,this is because as education improve their mental progress and skills ,so it provide employment to them ,resulting in decrement of crime percentage.to examplify,
A survey conducted by international crime Branch showed that those culcript who got appropriate education ,became a good man in their life.
To conclude, infraction rate decreases by giving hard punishment of offender but using different methods to overcome from crime rate is a better way.
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- College and University directory of U S Iowa
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society 56
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ferent methods to decrease delenquency. while criminal will afraid to do crime in fut...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
... crime in future by receiving punishment,this essay beleaves that there are many diff...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ment,this essay beleaves that there are many different methods like providing education to cri...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... from that punishment again. As a result ,violation ,infraction rates will reduces...
^^
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...punishment again. As a result ,violation ,infraction rates will reduces and it wil...
^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...esult ,violation ,infraction rates will reduces and it will maintain law and order in c...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...will maintain law and order in country. to emplify a survey conducted by Indian go...
^^
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cted by Indian government in 2019 showed that by following law strictly, it help ...
^^
Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...wed that by following law strictly, it help offenders to overcome from crime. O...
^^^^
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ollowing law strictly, it help offenders to overcome from crime. On the other ...
^^
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...vercome from crime. On the other hand , there are further more different techni...
^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cient education as a result decrement in crime rates,this is because as education...
^^
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...on as a result decrement in crime rates,this is because as education improve their m...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...improve their mental progress and skills ,so it provide employment to them ,resul...
^^
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mprove their mental progress and skills ,so it provide employment to them ,result...
^^
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...heir mental progress and skills ,so it provide employment to them ,resulting in decrem...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...kills ,so it provide employment to them ,resulting in decrement of crime percenta...
^^
Line 6, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e culcript who got appropriate education ,became a good man in their life. To c...
^^
Line 8, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... To conclude, infraction rate decreases by giving hard punishment of offender bu...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34222222222 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92162750457 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564444444444 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.989223184 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.714285714 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1428571429 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145055466283 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686085090399 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423746981831 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839341687438 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424552087715 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.