There is an argument that whether giving longer incarciation to offender is good method to decrease infraction or there are more different methods to decrease delenquency. while criminal will afraid to do crime in future by receiving punishment, this essay beleaves that there are many different methods like providing education to criminal.
On the one hand, the major reason that how delinquency rate decreases by giving tough punishment to offenders is that they will afraid to do evel things next time, this is because they will not want to suffer from that punishment again. As a result, violation, infraction rates will reduces and it will maintain law and order in country. to emplify a survey conducted by an Indian government in 2019 showed that 70% of criminals who receive appropriate education helps them to become a good man in their life as compared to other criminals.
On the other hand, there are further more different techniques such as provide them sufficient education as a result decrement in crime rates,this is because as education improve their mental progress and skills, so it provide employment to them ,resulting in decrement of crime percentage.to examplify,
A survey conducted by an international crime Branch showed that those culcript who got appropriate education ,became a good man in their life.
To conclude, infraction rate decreases by giving hard punishment of offender but using different methods to overcome from crime rate is a better way.
- College and University directory of U S Iowa
- Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society 56
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2510460251 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86746753365 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539748953975 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.368069243 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.285714286 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1428571429 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133201971675 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064324286855 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455496675537 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809720161955 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441154843324 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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