Some people think that children should be sent to nursery school before they go to primary school, while others think it is better if they stay at home?
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a widely accepted fact that education plays pivotal role in the personality development of human being, moreover at what age should a child be exposed to schooling is a debatable topic where individuals have their personal justifications. Many individuals opine that nursery education prior to primary school is important while on the other hand, quite a few people suggest that spending time at home before primary school is more beneficial. The essay describes both merits and demerits of sending kids to primary school.
Considering plethora of observational studies, it is evident that early exposure to the classroom environment prepares the child to understand and interact with his/ her peers and teachers. Moreover, it widens their sphere of social interaction, as a result of which, the young ones develop cognitive abilities and become more confident and independent. Additionally, familiarizing the kid to preparatory school enhances behavioral attributes, for instance listening to others or helping one another.
On the other hand, quite a few individuals, argue that exposing the children to the outside world, at a nascent stage makes them vulnerable to the juvenile crime. The fact cannot be ignored that, at this early age of only a few years, children do not have judging and decision making ability , owing which, they fall prey to heinous events and in turn it can negatively impact the curiosity to learn new things. Furthermore, spending time at home, helps to develop emotional bond between the parents and the kids.
Admission to nursery school, henceforth, is subjected to various factors, including ,mutual consent of parents and children. In my opinion, introducing children early to the nursery school prepares them for the formal education, therefore elementary school is important than staying at home.
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...have judging and decision making ability , owing which, they fall prey to heinous ...
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... subjected to various factors, including ,mutual consent of parents and children. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42708333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92347615054 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631944444444 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0693904862 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.090909091 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288726925909 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997806625411 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798344542101 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161106894707 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900657651987 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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