There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Automobiles, a great invention, from the industrial era are considered both as a blessing and as a curse. It is evident that extensive utilization of four-wheeler is posing both environmental and health issues for the consumers. This essay describes a few amongst a lot of problems caused by the excessive usage of cars in our daily lives.
On one side, where personal vehicles provides ease of transportation, on the other side they portray serious threads to human health resulting in compromised physical strength. It has been observed that people prefer driving rather than walking even for shorter distances, as a result of which, of late the incidence rate of obesity has grown enormously. In addition to this, limited physical activity is also leading to decline in tenacity for bones and joints.
Not only on human health, it has been proven by the scientific research, that the unthoughtful usage of automobiles also has detrimental effects on the environment. The harmful emissions from the vehicles pollute the air that we breathe, as a result of which, the number of asthma patients hospitalized is increasing annually at an alarming rate. Last but not the least, the overall planet’s surface temperature has risen by significant degrees, resulting in issues such as global warming, which is mainly due to noxious gases such as sulphur dioxide and carbon mono oxide.
In the light of above mentioned arguments although automobiles are eminent part of our regular lives, they should be wisely put to use considering the growing number of environmental problems and the health concerns created by the same.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23282442748 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96195256306 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629770992366 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4638569213 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.1 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941288385099 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319819351364 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0202350326873 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502441469816 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105635984842 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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