Some people think that children who spend a lot of time reading children's story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree?
A section of society believes that time is lost if children squander it by reading storybooks and not doing other resourceful activities. In my opinion, I agree with this, children should also get involved in different productive engagements which do more holistic development rather than just reading storybooks.
Children are fascinated by various storybooks because of simplistic articulation of the message with an attractive storyline of their interest, which in return, entices them to read and eventually gather a good command on vocabulary and comprehension. It also helps them in improving their thought process, moreover, when they grow old, they recapitulate the same and explore a variety of books and expand their horizons of knowledge. Apart from that, it aids them to gain wisdom in various domains to become better human beings and become more successful in the future.
Nevertheless, they also need to study, spend time with family and engage in physical activities like playing with friends to gain social skills which are very crucial for their complete development. Firstly, family bonding is vital as they acquire values from their parents which is important. In addition to that, different outdoor activities like playing any sport, which not only improvises their physical health but also enhances other key talents like negotiation, coordination, planning and communication abilities.
To conclude, in my opinion, learning from reading storybooks is acceptable as long as it is performed in moderation while also
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, apart from, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54852320675 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93464086458 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628691983122 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0580924186 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.111111111 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5555555556 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219876068517 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906221654363 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686705363411 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124919101362 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913788377667 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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