Some people think that the government should establish free library in each town other believe that it is a waste of money. Since people can access the internet at home to obtain information.
In recent times one of the most debated issue related to making a free library by government . For human kind of the town a number of assert that the library has the ocean of the knowledge in light of the fact that of there are a number of books related to all field while, the others contend that the In the latest trend all family have smartphone consequently they easily access information from internet.
However , I strongly believe that the both option are right on their place. On the one side, of the argument there are nation who reason that building a library is educated Idea .First and foremost, making a library is a
good thing in light of the fact that a plethora of society go into the library for reading types of novel. They gain their knowledge from them. For example , a plethora of community cannot afford the expensive dictionary,
on the contrary they can easily read dictionary in library. The second point in this context is that the library is the only one place where people can read in peacefully.second example, numerous people do not feel please in their homes while they go into the library for complete the task. Moreover , numerous people go there for competitive or vital exam.
On the other hand , the other group believe that the in the digital Era there is a no requirement of physical publication room. According to them, in the latest train crowd are use their smartphone. They can access all the information from anywhere and anytime in their place.
For example , numerous cities and believe that why they take a burden of bunch of albums while they can get information on internet more ever they can mark that the topic on album and write a comment on their topic. The second point in this context is that establishing library has huge cost and it takes a huge space from the town. Day by day population has increased and space as the biggest issue of the world.
To conclude , In my opinion today 's generation are smart, and they always preferred smart things although, the investing in libraries is essential question for all. Thus , both the argument seems logical and appropriate and I equally agree to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71164021164 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50943747421 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0908301535 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.3125 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203034741658 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602119105655 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474785313568 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906720234151 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528381345813 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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