Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people. Do you agree or disagree?
Unemployment is an immense problem all around the world. In democratic countries people choose their representatives in government; people expect their issues would be decoded by them. I am strongly in favor of the statement that the government should aid people who are jobless or homeless. Let us discuss it in the later paragraphs.
To begin with, education is expensive, people end up spending a lot to complete their studies. The investment is done by parents or students have to opt the loan from banks. After study completion, when they do not get jobs it is a disappointment for them and burden of repaying loan make their life miserable. In this situation, they might involve in illegal activities for their bread and butter. Hence, the desperation is the reason of the increasing crime. The government has to be flexible on education loan’s interest rate and duration of repayment. Also, free education for deserving students or scholarships can be helpful to support the students initially.
To continue, unemployed people rush to big cities for better job opportunities. In most of the cities, the rents are soaring so it is massive trouble for an unemployed person to manage accommodation. The shelterless people do not have many options, they often use to sleep at railway stations or under the bridges. They suffer from various illnesses due to extreme weather and unhygienic places for living. The government can provide benefits for living expenses or building shelter for homeless people where shared housing can be a solution for accommodation.
To summarize, it is the government’s responsibility to benefit its citizens. The welfare could be an aid to reduce the crime rate in a country and helpful for the development process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...le do not have many options, they often use to sleep at railway stations or under t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18947368421 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09984461331 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6128436747 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167342201759 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510687704145 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581193038253 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105379748058 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725373497492 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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