Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people. Do you agree or disagree?
A significant number of individuals believe that the state should take responsibility for the deprived individuals like jobless and displaced people. This essay will discuss why the government should support disadvantaged people.
Disadvantaged people must be supported by the state so that they do not fall under wrong activities like robbery. The financial support to an unemployed youth in much needed which will help him in fulfilling his basic needs such as food, home and health. Unavailability of money can persuade them to harm society by stealing things around, therefore it becomes the responsibility of the authority to control these individuals needs. A recent survey revealed that most of the crimes are carried by uneducated and unemployed youth thus, the government should find alternatives in supporting the underprivileged individuals.
Another factor is the deprived individuals increase the burden for the government in terms of economic growth like an increase in poverty of the nation. Unemployed individuals mean no money to support the living standards and lacking funds create more pressure on the requirements of society like good hygiene which further results into increase in poor conditions of living. Hence, the government should support these people to raise such individuals from the poverty level. For instance, in India below poverty individuals are provided with bank loans on zero per cent interest for 5 years by the government banks.
In conclusion, this essay discussed that financial support is must to these individuals so that they do not follow wrong paths in life and support the economy of the nation and I agree with the notion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40684410646 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97013913748 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566539923954 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7404415742 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.272727273 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186843040928 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798990296801 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633532419499 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115751644114 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456052400885 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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