Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.

To what extent do you agree with this view?

On an average count 37% of the world's population rely on their artistic work for their basic income. People with a view that the government is wasting money on arts are somehow unaware of the benefits of it. Its quite impressive when you visit a country, and a group of people with different and creative talents display their cultural art in the form of live events, shows and ornaments. Some of them are interesting enough that they became a part of your memory or a decoration piece at home.

In my opinion the decision makers are not investing without doing a homework. There are multiple factors that affects and becomes the reason of investment in arts. For local bodies it generates multiple job opportunities. Those who are creative and have a passion of doing something different, gets benefits from these governmental support. Furthermore, it represents and differentiate your country at an international level. Family can enjoy multiple festivals during weekends that helps to overcome the work or daily routine exhaustion.

On the other hand, people they do have a valid point as they see lack of investment in neccessary areas that needs to be considered with higher priorities. But improper planning does not needs to be taken as wastage of money in a field that is quite valuable for the people and the country.

In conclusion, It is the responsibility of the government to manage these issues. Instead of focusing in some areas and isolating the others. They should make a proper budgeting plan, considering all the aspects so that they can manage and invest in multiple fields properly. This seems to be the only way to avoid chaos among people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
On an average count 37% of the worlds population rely on their artistic work ...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...orities. But improper planning does not needs to be taken as wastage of money in a fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95729537367 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76196478756 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604982206406 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.226269151 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195957192689 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558852853106 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776998406888 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10595360379 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058099300343 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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