Some people think that human history has been a journey from ignorance to knowledge. Others argue that this underestimates the achievements of ancient cultures, and overvalues our achievements. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Over the years, we human being have been innovating more and more new technologies, which seem that new generations are getting more sophisticated than old ones. But it does not mean new is always better. In my opinion, it has two sides just like any other things.
In olden times, we did not have the computer, smartphone and any equipment that make our lives much easier. These all have become available to us since last two decades. This development in our lives makes big difference between us and our ancestors. What's more, we all see how small children nowadays are way smarter than we used to be in their age.
On the other hand, today scientists from every industry study how our ancestors figured out sciences without the technologies we use now. Furthermore, those current scientists still get astonished by how deep our ancestors' knowledge was. From this point of view, it looks like as if we have been getting less sophisticated.
To conclude, it is hard to say which one is true, as there are two angles that both make sense. Personally, I would say there is not a big distinction between the way of how the brain of us and our previous generations works. In other words, in past times there were few genius people, while today more smart people are out there. But the potential capacity of their brain is pretty much the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ifference between us and our ancestors. Whats more, we all see how small children now...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, still, while, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69620253165 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55259266568 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62447257384 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5746604681 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122467864645 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417010881519 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350392965543 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716802755919 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233911972856 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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