Some people think it is better for a children to grow in a city, while others think that life in a countryside is more suitable. What are the advantages and disadvantages in both places?
Many individuals consider that it is superior, if the child upbringing is carried in urban regions. However, others do not agree and believe that rural regions are more stable and beneficial for the person to grow. In this essay, the benefits and drawbacks of living in both locations will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the urban regions are always having more opportunity with new technology to make survival more relaxed. Person in cities are way more advanced and updated with the technology which helps them to make their life easy. Although, the crowd and traffic congestion makes the life in cities difficult. Every day the number of vehicles are adding on the highway which reflects on increasing the pollution levels and create unhealthy environment for an individual.
On the other side, country side are always with abundant supply of natural resources such as water and free from contamination. The villages carry ample supply of natural resources which keeps the person away from diseases and infections. In addition to that, the pleasant weather of rural regions makes the life easier in villages unlike city atmosphere. However, education access is very limited in rural regions. The knowledge and learning in school is basic right for any individual, but the countryside places are still deprived of such facilities especially in Asian countries like India.
In summary, both the sides holds positive side as well as negative sides. Although majority of people prefer to live in urban regions only because of the development and more opportunity to learn new things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, well, in addition, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23643410853 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65022479893 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600775193798 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.466860551 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133464972487 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416435091977 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350792283447 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783574176707 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151003407792 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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