Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the Internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Knowing other cultures and societies is a great hobby which gives insight into how people use to live in different parts of the world. Few individuals argue that traveling is necessary to get an idea about other countries while others have the impression that it is futile as every single information is available on social media.
Humans are social animals; they are dependent on each other for their need and curious to explore the world. In this era, every information is available online. Some people consider that traveling to know about other countries is useless because by simply clicking on the internet and through television programs people get information about the respective country.
I would place my own example, that a few years ago there was a competition to write an essay about any historical place in the world. My son had chosen to write about Haji Sophia in Turkey. He gathered all the information by searching the famous site Google and through the encyclopedia. Fortunately, there was a documentary program ongoing those days on television that gave the visual impacts and helped him to write the wonderful essay. As a result, my son won the competition. However, traveling to the country would have resulted in unforgettable memories.
Traveling abroad to know about different parts of the world is a great hobby itself. There are people who prefer traveling to get knowledge. In addition, it gives them a great chance to pass their leisure time and let go odd their stress. Change of environment and personally visualization of other societies gives a great and memorable impact. Five years ago I had a chance to visit Malaysia with my husband. We gathered all the information of the cities to be visited. Moreover, my husband asked one of his friend about the place to visit there, who had recently been there at that time which really helped us. However, when are reached Malaysia and visited the places by ourselves, gave us a bundle of joys, excitement and unforgettable memories.
In my opinion, social media has helped people to know about other cultures, but traveling gives chance to not only know about other so societies but also to mingle with them and to leave a pleasant feeling
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...bby which gives insight into how people use to live in different parts of the world...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, while, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97058823529 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69221065799 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513368983957 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2482586763 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.95 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273481817453 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758046525144 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738771785585 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166824567402 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609796133141 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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