Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case?
Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The fashion industry is thriving like never before, and the fashion trends change very frequently these days, alluring people from all ages regardless of their gender and social status. Wardrobes are more filled with brands than actual dressing needs of a person. People believe that we should not blindly follow the modern dressing style, rather we shoukd wear what we like and which suits our personality and i fully adhere to it. This essay will analyse the demerits of following fashion trend.
Firstly, fashion design represents the creativity and innovation of a designer and it hides our own identity. It seems that we are showcasing their brands when we move in the society. Following modern style blindly takes away our uniqueness and tags us with brand names.
Secondly, fashion trends are set to benefit industries more than to the consumer on the monetary base. People spend hundreds and thousands just to buy branded dresses that will make tgem look stylish in social gatherings. Designers rip consumer's money for the sake of their creativity. Fashion trends also give rise to competition in the global market, which again benefits the industry.
Finally, wearing latest design suits certainly makes us proud and our trendy look appeases the general public but it should not be neglected that basic purpose of wearing clotges is to protect ourselves from the climate change.for instance, we usually wear warm clothing in winters, if we wear designer's light fabric just to follow the trend, we might fell sick.
In nutshell, it is of utmost importance that people buy clothes which are more wearable, and in line with their lifestyle. Fashion trends change in every season and is merely a tactic to sell their product. If we keep on following the different trends, a competition will arise which may take away our identities, and also our cultural and traditional norms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'wearing the latest'.
Suggestion: wearing the latest
...gain benefits the industry. Finally, wearing latest design suits certainly makes us proud a...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... proud and our trendy look appeases the general public but it should not be neglected that bas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11290322581 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46644283748 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587096774194 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8299083863 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101220059923 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355999222985 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307435897094 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577429815968 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313909787328 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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