Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as tv, friends and music. Others believe that family still remains very important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A child’s mind is influenced by a multiple number of factors. According to few, in today’s times a child’s brain is highly influenced by TV, pals and even music. However, others still feel that parent are major influencers in a child’s life. This essay would asses both the sides and conclude with my opinion.
To begin with, the people who believe friends, TV and music are largely responsible for impacting Child’s mind nowadays is because of the sole reason that, the child’s constant contacts established over the years with their peers. It may be for the good or even for the bad. However, in current times it majorly for the worst Like for instance, some children take up drinking, smoking, abusing, prevaricating trying to emulate their friends, TV or even music. To illustrate, juvenile crime has registered a drastic increase in the past few years due to violence in films, serials advertisement etc. being depicted openly on the TV. If, violence is propagated at such large scale it is bound to corrupt a child’s innocuous mind.
On the other side, there are people who bolster the option that parents play a pivotal role in shaping up the child’s life. There is valid reason behind their opinion. Take for example, there are generation of famous artists, doctors and even athletes. Who believe in following the foots steps of their parents, they are not the type of children to be influenced by the buddies or blindly follow media. Like Zakir Hussain the famous Tabla virtuoso who chose to follow his father Ustad Allah Rakha the legendary table players footsteps and went to extent of winning the Padma Bhushan. There are many who are more inclined towards their parents than, their friends.
To recapitulate. I feel that parents play a prime role in moulding their child’s behaviour, attitude since birth as, who else is the best well-wisher of the child, other than his/her parents?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, well, for example, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08411214953 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73119370719 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8932435028 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197085084314 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638705950297 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589094399549 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128933538822 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703647304942 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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