Some people think that money is the best gift to give youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Young people like the gift and could able to see happiness in their faces. According to someone, gifting money would be the greatest gladness to person but unlikely it affects their behavior. This essay will discuss both views and logical conclusions on which is top will derive at the end of the discussion.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable to accept that giving cash to young adults would be the most valuable gift. In other words, it provides unbounded happiness to them when someone handing over money. It also supports the people to buy whatever they want to get it. It sometimes aids them to purchase what they do not have at that moment, for example, books, pens, and mobiles. Therefore, it is agreed that cash offers to young adults yield cheerfulness.
On the other hand, some people argued that contribute money as a gift is a serious issue that spoils the young people and leads them to do a bad activity such as betting. There is a multitude of gifts that could be provided, other than money, which aid them in their studies or to fulfill their dreams, for instance, laptops for those who want to become a software engineer or bicycle for those who wish to be a cyclist. This also could be the finest remembrance. Consequently, presenting the gifts than money, which is either smaller or bigger does not matter, would be the memorable one, which renders uncontrolled joy and satisfaction.
In conclusion, I opine that money could be used to buy any products but when someone buys the products and presents it as a gift to the adult would bring more pleasure and unforgettable moments in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'hands'.
Suggestion: hands
...nbounded happiness to them when someone handing over money. It also supports the people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73498233216 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54448368693 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.308808595 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17757270454 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608837546089 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471520590451 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102394766136 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362642171822 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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