Some people think that news has no connection in people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read news in newspapers and watch television news programs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
There are evidences that indicate that news has a substantial connection with the lives of the people. Yet surprisingly, some people still claim that time is being wasted as newspapers are being read, and television news programs are being watched by the people. I somewhat disagree with this ideology.
Truly, some media outlets do not often share important information that might add value to people. Instead, they publish news about sea storm or, perhaps, desert hurricane, describing unfortunate nature occurrences with attention-grabbing details. But typically establishing little or no connection with the daily activities of the audience after investing time in seeking the information. However, letter could be written to auditors in an attempt to prevent further uninteresting news.
Having said that, I believe news tend to have impact on the lives of the people in some ways. From publishing recent jobs that may favour job seekers to creating awareness about vaccines that could assist in curing diseases, people are depending on broadcasters to be presenting such information to them. In addition to that, news seems to be significantly important in avoiding problems. For example, if reporters publicize an ongoing robbery in a particular location, people could restrain from such route and, probably, save lives. Most importantly, news appears to guide people in preparing for events and also in making decisions. If this were not true, people would not gather weather reports when they need to board aeroplane. These show the overall connection between news and people.
In conclusion, not only is news important in the day-to-day activities of people, but also is it relevant to successful accomplishment of such activities. Therefore, I disagree that reading newspaper and watching television programs is a waste of time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46853146853 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99396266032 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622377622378 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4177932023 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398908095119 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12512408706 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939676568632 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248070702058 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766794411487 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.