In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for the government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
More and more people in some countries are having health problems because they are consuming fast food in excess. Tackling such problems by imposing higher tax on junk food may assist in reducing the unhealthy-eating habit of the people, but it could also result in creating more problems that may eventually negate the benefit it brings.
Granted, imposing more tax on fast food that often contains more fats and less nutritional contents would make it more expensive, deterring people from consuming such meal and living on medication. However, some of these consumers are rich and can afford the food even if its price skyrockets. This indicates that higher tax on fast food can reduce its consumption trend among the poor but not among the rich.
In addition to knowing that hiking the price of fast food may not stop everybody from eating junk food, it could also lead to some contentious issues. First, such policy could have a negative impact on the economy. This is because many people may be unable to afford to patronize fast-food businesses, as the price of food increases. Therefore, such businesses that solely depend on patronage may discontinue and, consequently, suffer a possible shutdown. When this happens, the rate of unemployment would increase in these countries, which probably would negatively affect the economy in terms of decreasing tax payments to the government and increasing unemployment benefits from the government to the unemployed people. Second, such tax hiking could lead to regressive tax. Obviously, many low-income individuals probably would be victims of the increased tax since they are the major consumer of fast food, as published by the Economist newspaper in December 2019.
So why should the government impose higher tax on fast food in an attempt to scare people away from it when the above evidences suggest not only that the economy could suffer recession, but also the masses could lose more money ? I see no reason to, even as it seems some people may deter from eating the unhealthy food. I completely disagree with the ideology
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13450292398 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67572735307 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529239766082 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8732133718 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.066666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34832664162 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119700522439 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637610802611 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231751257381 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295600833505 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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