Some people think that people can be encouraged to take up sport through sporting events such as Olympics. However, others think that there are better ways to encourage adults to take part in sports.
Discuss both views and give opinion.
The Government is motivating its citizens to take part in sports regularly. While most people believe that the Olympic events encourage them to participate in sporting events, others argue that the more steps need to be taken for motivating them. This essay will discuss why the Olympic games play an important role but why more investment in sports facilities is far better.
Human beings are fascinated by fame, which seems to be the most obvious reason to get motivated by sports events. In other words, during the tournaments the players and their achievements make most of the headlines; thus everyone, especially young people, may start taking part in the sport of their choice. For instance, in the UK, whenever any major tournament, such as commonwealth or FIFA, is being organized, sports club registration registers a substantial increase in registrations.
Conversely, I believe that the unavailability of local sports facilities and the cost of playing sport are the main deterrent to the people who are interested in participating in sports. Because of hectic schedules, people are reluctant to travel to the facilities which are far away from their home or office. Adding to this, the rising cost of living in most of the cities, nowadays, may deter them to spend money on sports. Moreover, by spending on facilities such as stadium or tennis court with cheaper memberships, not only government can make sure that people are not having any hurdles in participating in games, but they can also save a huge amount of money which otherwise would have been wasted on the Olympic events.
In conclusion, although the sports events encourage people to some extent, it does not justify the exorbitant money spend on games; therefore, personally, I believe that different steps must be taken by local authorities so that more people become interested in playing games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1862745098 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82944641453 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4472698417 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.272727273 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283252175622 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105924483004 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052309056049 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172421149372 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368612718339 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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