Some parents think it is good to give their children mobile phones, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The mobile phone has completely changed the way of communication. While some parents are of opinion
that child should be given a mobile phone, others believe children should not be allowed to use it.
This essay will discuss why using mobile phone is beneficial for children but why
it has it has a more adverse impact on teenagers.
The parents who are more concerned about their offspring's security often justify the usage of
mobile phone by children. In other words, these handheld devices, especially the mobile phones, help
parents to know if their child is in a problem or not. For instance, whenever the child does not return
home after school on time, a mother can call them and know the reason of delay. Adding to this,
many applications are available on the internet, which can help to track the current location of a child; thus
parents are saved from various panic attacks which otherwise would not be possible without smartphones.
Conversely, I agree with those who oppose smartphones usage by juveniles. The prime reason
is the addiction. Most of the teenagers are obsessed with their mobile phones: checking them
every few minutes, texting people all the time, checking to see how many likes they have got after
they have posted on social media, refusing to put their mobile phones on one side while
sitting round on the table for the dinner. This overuse does not only impact children's study
but also have an adverse impact on their health; hence most of the parents avoid giving mobile phones to their
offspring.
In conclusion, although the usage of mobile phones by children may give some relaxation to parents, I
believe that the harmful impacts cannot be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10839160839 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42540428496 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7882689271 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281743091704 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946078601302 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745963118483 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816151138518 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784911655867 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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